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PostSubject: Chūkū akuma   Sat Jun 29, 2013 6:34 am

Name: Chūkū akuma
Race: fullbringer

description: He is a tall man with brown hair and gray eyes and has a tattoo of a tiger on his left hand.

age: 15

Rank: 4

Background: mystery

Height: 6:4

Weight 180 pounds

Gear: 4 rings a hat and everyday clothes a black tank top and blue gym shorts nothing else
Personality: Chūkū is not willing to fight unless absolutely necessary.
Chūkū is kind and caring but will not let anybody near him since his parents death. He never becomes attached to anything because of it. e may come off as disrespectful/rude but it is because he does not want to get attached to anyone ever again. Now Chūkū lives in a secluded place in the woods you will hardly catch him in town unless he is shopping, going to school, or visiting someone.

Likes: nothing neutral on everything.

Dislikes: nothing neutral on everything.

Background: his like was turned upside down when he was 11 and his father was killed in the during a bar fight he had cause because some guy owed him some money. When his mother got the news she killed herself, now all he has left is 4 rings she had left behind and his father’s favorite hat. One day he had gone into town to go shopping, but he found a kid who dropped their teddy bear and gave it back to him. Later that day he saw the kid getting attacked by a hollow then he jumped in and pushed him out of the way to save him. Thinking it would be the end he closed his eyes but nothing happened something saved him his father's hat transformed into body armor and his rings had transformed into a shield and a sword. He lunges toward the hollow and slices him in two now every so often he visits the kid to check up on him because he could not help but become attached.

Fullbring: Ō no kyōdaina kishi (the king’s mighty knight)
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PostSubject: Re: Chūkū akuma   Sat Jun 29, 2013 6:53 am

Er... denied. I won't even say why.
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PostSubject: Re: Chūkū akuma   Sat Jun 29, 2013 7:11 am

I edited it so now is it approved
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PostSubject: Re: Chūkū akuma   Sat Jun 29, 2013 7:12 am

Er... nu. Go... look at my CS. For a good example.
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PostSubject: Re: Chūkū akuma   Sat Jun 29, 2013 7:58 am

edited again
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PostSubject: Re: Chūkū akuma   Sat Jun 29, 2013 8:11 am

You need more on like... everything. Try producing at least two para on personality and 3 on background. If you need to break it up, make one paragragh about how he is during fun goof-off regular times, and one about how he is when it is time to be serious. For the background, one event really is not enough to make an accurate description of your character. Just get more INTO your writing, making characters is the best part!!
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